Ningan makalanena yo – The Story of the Four Candles

April 2010

1. Text in English, as provided by Roger Mills (04/04/2010)

The story of the four candles

The four candles burned slowly. Their ambiance was so soft you could hear them speak.

The first candle said, "I am Peace, but these days, nobody wants to keep me lit." Then Peace’s flame slowly diminished and went out completely.

The second candle said, "I am Faith, but these days, I am no longer indispensable." Then Faith’s flame slowly diminished and went out completely.

Sadly the third candle spoke, "I am Love and I haven’t the strength to stay lit any longer. People put me aside and don’t understand my importance. They even forget to love those who are nearest to them." And waiting no longer, Love went out completely.

Suddenly—a child entered the room and saw the three candles no longer burning.

The child began to cry, "Why are you not burning? You are supposed to stay lit until the end."

Then the fourth candle spoke gently to the little boy, "Don’t be afraid, for I am Hope, and while I still burn, we can re-light the other candles."

With shining eyes, the child took the candle of Hope and lit the other three candles.

Never let the Flame of Hope go out. With Hope in you life, no matter how bad things may be, Peace, Faith and Love may shine brightly once again.

2. My translation into Ayeri

Ningan makalanena yo

Ang napyan pero makalan yo. Midayanang tan mandoy-ing, ming tangvāng, naratang.

Ang naraya menan makalanena, "Yang sa Sempay, nārya ang noyo ranya davano, makasayang sayling." Epang ang kivisyo perimay na Sempay, nay tenyayong ikan panca.

Ang naraya taman makalanena, "Yang sa Paronān, nārya surpreng, ang no iltayon netoy keynam yas davano." Epang ang kivisyo perimay na Paronān, nay tenyayong ikan panca.

Ang naraya giday kayan makalanena, "Yang sa Cān nay yang mico-ma netoy kadāre ming makayang tadayyam ikaneng. Ang tapyyon dayrin keynam yas nay sa bihanoytong kapan nā. Sa koronaryatong cayam adanya-nyama si ang vayon nasayya ton." Nay ang galamoyya sayling Cān, nay tenyayang ikan.

Takamenya ang kongya gan sangalya nay silvyāng, napyon netoy makalanang.

Ang cunya sipyam gan, "Manga napoyvāng sinyisa? Sa mehvāng hangyam perimay vana bahisya pang-vā pesan."

Epang ang naraya mandoy yan makalanena yanya kivo, "Karoyu, yanoyam yang sa Gahān, nay napyang tarela ling, sa ming na-napnisa makalanye palung."

Nivayēri pranyam, ang paya gan makalanas Gahān, nay sa napisayāng makalan kay palung.

Ramyu tenyayam tadoy sa Tupoygahān. Ang səna-napyon maka sempay, paronān nay cān gahāneri tenya vana, mya mirongyon niru arēn simingang.

3. Morphemic breakdown

Interlinear glosses have been made according to Wikipedia's list of glossing abbreviations.

Ang
Ang
AT
napyan
nap-yan
burn-3mp
pero
pero
slow(ly)
makalan
makalan-0
candle-FOC
yo.
yo
four
The four candles burned slowly.
Midayanang
midayan-ang
surrounding-A
tan
tan
3mp.GEN
mandoy-ing,
mandoy=ing
soft=so
ming
ming
can
tangvāng,
tang-vāng
hear-2s.A
naratang
nara-tang
speak-3mp.A
Their surrounding was so soft that you could hear that they spoke.
Ang
ang
AT
naraya
nara-ya
speak-3ms
menan
menan-0
first-FOC
makalanena,
makalan-ena
candle-GEN
"Yang
yang
1s.A
0
0
be
sa
sa
PAT
Sempay,
‹name›
Peace
nārya
nārya
but
ang
ang
AT
noyo
no-yo
want-3ns
ranya
ranya-0
nobody-FOC
davano,
davano
today
makasayang
maka-asa-yang
shine-HAB-1s.A
sayling."
sayling
further
I am Peace, but nobody today wants that I keep shining further.
Epang
epang
after
ang
ang
AT
kivisyo
kivis-yo
lessen-3ns
perimay
perimay-0
shine-FOC
na
na
GEN
Sempay,
‹name›
Peace
nay
nay
and
tenyayong
tenya-yong
die-3ns.A
ikan
ikan
complete(ly)
panca.
panca
eventually
Then Peace's shine diminished and in the end it died completely.
Ang
ang
AF
naraya
nara-ya
speak-3ms
taman
taman-0
second-FOC
makalanena,
makalan-ena
candle-GEN
"Yang
yang
1s.A
0
0
be
sa
sa
P
Paronān
‹name›
Faith
nārya
nārya
but
surpreng,
surp-reng
seem-3INAN.SG.A
ang
ang
AF
no
no
want
iltayon
ilta-yon
need-3pn
netoy
netoy
not_anymore
keynam
keynam-0
people-FOC
yas
yas
1ms.P
davano."
davano
today
The second candle spoke, "I am Faith, but it seems that the people don't want to need me any longer today."
Epang
epang
after
ang
ang
AT
kivisyo
kivis-yo
lessen-3ns
perimay
perimay-0
shine-FOC
na
na
GEN
Paronān,
‹name›
Faith
nay
nay
and
tenyayong
tenya-yong
die-3ns.A
ikan
ikan
complete(ly)
panca.
panca
eventually
Then Faith's shine diminished and in the end it died completely.
Ang
ang
AF
naraya
nara-ya
speak-3ms
giday
giday
sad(ly)
kayan
kayan-0
third
makalanena,
makalan-ena
candle-GEN
"Yang
yang
1s.A
0
0
be
sa
sa
P
Cān
‹name›
Love
nay
nay
and
yang
yang
1s.A
0
0
be
mico-ma
mico=ma
strong=enough
netoy
netoy
not_anymore
kadāre
kadāre
so_that
ming
ming
can
makayang
maka-yang
shine-1s.A
tadayyam
taday-yam
time-BEN
ikaneng.
ikan-eng
much-more
Then spoke the third candle, sad, "I am Love and I am not strong enough anymore to be able to shine for much more time.
Ang
ang
AF
tapyyon dayrin
tapy-yon-0 dayrin
put-3np-FOC aside
keynam
keynam-0
people-FOC
yas
yas
1s.P
nay
nay
and
sa
sa
PF
bihanoytong
bihan-oy-tong
understand-NEG-3np.A
kapan
kapan-0
importance-FOC
nā.
1s.GEN
People put me aside and they do not understand my importance.
Sa
sa
PF
koronaryatong
koron-arya-tong
know-PRIV-3np
cayam
ca-yam
love-PART
adanya-nyama
adanya-Ø=nyama
that_one-FOC=even
si
si-Ø
REL-P
ang
ang
AF
vayon
va-yon.Ø
SUP-3np.FOC
nasayya
nasay-ya
near-LOC
ton."
ton
3np.GEN
They even forget to love those who are nearest to them."
Nay
nay
and
ang
ang
AF
galamoyya
galam-oy-ya
wait-NEG-3ms
sayling
sayling
further
Ø Cān,
FOC ‹name›
Love
nay
nay
and
tenyayang
tenya-yang
die-3ms.AGT
ikan.
ikan
complete(ly)
And Love did not wait any further and died completely.
Takamenya
takamenya
suddenly
ang
ang
AF
kongya
kong-ya
enter-3ms
gan
gan-0
child-FOC
sangalya
sangal-ya
room-LOC
nay
nay
and
silvyāng,
silv-yāng
see-3sm.A
napyon
nap-yon
burn-3ns
netoy
netoy
not_anymore
makalanang.
makalan-ang
candle-A
Suddenly a child enters the room and sees that the candles are not burning anymore.
Ang
ang
AF
cunya
cun-ya
begin-3ms
sipyam
sip-yam
cry-PART
gan,
gan-0
child-FOC
"Manga
manga
PART
napoyvāng
nap-oy-vāng
burn-NEG-2.A
sinyisa?
sinyisa
why
The child began to cry, "Why are you not burning?
Sa
sa
PF
mehvāng
meh-vāng
be_supposed_to-2.A
hangyam
hang-yam
stay-PART
perimay
perimay-Ø
shine-FOC
vana
vana
2.GEN
bahisya
bahis-ya
day-LOC
pang-vā
pang=vā
end-SUP
pesan."
pesan
until
Your shine is supposed to stay until the last day."
Epang
epang
after
ang
ang
AF
naraya
nara-ya
speak-3ms
mandoy
mandoy
soft(ly)
yan
yan-0
fourth-FOC
makalanena
makalan-ena
candle-GEN
yanya
yan-ya
boy-LOC
kivo,
kivo
little
"Karoyu,
kar-oy-u
fear-NEG-IMP
yanoyam
yanoyam
because
yang
yang
1s.A
0
0
be
sa
sa
P
Gahān,
‹name›
Hope
nay
nay
and
napyang
nap-yang
burn-1s.A
tarela
tarela
still
ling,
ling
while
sa
sa
PF
ming
ming
can
na-napnisa
‹redup›~nap-nisa
again~burn-1p.CAU
makalanye
makalan-ye-Ø
candle-PL-FOC
palung."
palung
other
Then the fourth candle spoke softly to the little boy, "Fear not, because I am Hope and as long as I am still burning, we can reenlighten the other candles."
Nivayēri
niva-ye-eri
eye-PL-INS
pranyam,
pran-yam
glitter-PART
ang
ang
AF
paya
pa-ya
take-3ms
gan
gan-0
child-FOC
makalanas
makalan-as
candle-P
Gahān,
‹name›
Hope
nay
nay
ang
sa
sa
PF
napisayāng
nap-isa-yāng
burn-CAU-1ms.A
makalan
makalan-0
candle-FOC
kay
kay
three
palung.
palung
other
With glittering eyes, the child took the candle Hope and enlightened the other three.
Ramyu
ramy-u
let-IMP
tenyayam
tenya-yam
die-PART
tadoy
tadoy
never
sa
sa
P
Tupoygahān.
tupoy-gahān
fire-hope
Never let the Hope-Fire die.
Ang
ang
AF
səna-napyon
sa-‹redup›~nap-yon
FUT-again-burn-3np
maka
maka
bright(ly)
sempay,
sempay-0
peace-FOC
paronān
paronān-0
faith-FOC
nay
nay
and
cān
cān-0
love-FOC
gahāneri
gahān-eri
hope-INS
tenya
ten-ya
life-LOC
vana,
vana
2.GEN
mya
mya
shall
mirongyon
mira-ong-yon
do-SJV-3np
niru
niru
bad
arēn
arēn
however
simingang.
siming-ang
circumstance-A
Peace, faith and love will shine brightly again in your life by means of Hope, however bad circumstances may be.

4. Smooth retranslation of my text into English

The Story of the Four Candles

The four candles burned slowly. Their surrounding was so soft that you could hear that they spoke.

I am Peace, but nobody today wants that I keep shining further. Then Peace's shine diminished and in the end it died completely.

The second candle spoke, "I am Faith, but it seems that the people don't want to need me any longer today." Then Faith's shine diminished and in the end it died completely.

Then spoke the third candle, sad, "I am Love and I am not strong enough anymore to be able to shine for much more time. People put me aside and they do not understand my importance. They even forget to love those who are nearest to them." And Love did not wait any further and died completely.

Suddenly a child enters the room and sees that the candles are not burning anymore.

The child began to cry, "Why are you not burning? Your shine is supposed to stay until the last day."

Then the fourth candle spoke softly to the little boy, "Fear not, because I am Hope and as long as I am still burning, we can reenlighten the other candles."

With glittering eyes, the child took the candle Hope and enlightened the other three.

Never let the Hope-Fire die. Peace, faith and love will shine brightly again in your life by means of Hope, however bad circumstances may be.



Carsten Becker 2010, CC BY-SA 4.0

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